Mii gotta say somethin too
Yo hold up a sec. Ya kn ow I am all for people having opinions and stuff, I am open to you having your own meaning but I am not accepting anyone sending insulting comments to a writer.
Critism is important for improvement and development, what you devided was right at the edge of critism and then dropped down to insulting level. Like hold up bitch and let me get this straight.
YOUR OPINION is that there are better Oikawas. Fine. Wonderful. Bake yourself a waffle, the fuck do I know. How relevant is your opinion to her, your personal preferance? Zero. You voiced your concernes about how they use a vocabulary not to your liking, unaestetic and unfitting in your opinion
wow okay fine. Thanks for that, but could you provide some useful information outside of “fancy words with no meaning”
In fact it would’ve been quite nice if you just said “You can work on your vocabulary and the variety of words you use. Most words you use seem too fancy with little providing feeling for the actual situation.”
THAT is cirtism. Your whole message was a lowblown insult and a very subjective point of view that I as a writer and critism seeker myself do absolutely DESPISE.
You are not the queen of writing, you are not the worlds comitee for writing, your opinion is not a professional one, and you sure as fuck are not the fucking empress of portrayal.
Your opinion and critism is very welcome and accepted such as tolerated.
Your hate and insults are NOT
and not on a very subjective and personal note from myself
FUCK OFF ANON